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An icy wind blows through the small window, stirring the blinds and letting in a small wisp of milky moon light.


You stand in front of your full length mirror, shirt lifted to the top of your rib cage, examining your bruises. They are no more than a day old but the distinct shape of a hand was still visible on your right side, looking almost like patches of dark mud in contrast of your pale skin. You poke them and wince as the pain brings back fresh memories of his cruel faces. His burning eyes.


The smell of beer and blood and sweat still clings to your torn clothes. You force your sore body out of your ragged clothes and into some comfortable sweats, and settle cautiously onto the sill of your window, opening it further to allow the cold breeze to caress your sensitive skin.


Looking out over the back yard, you can see the slightest crystals of frost slowly creeping up your beloved oak tree. The tree that held so many memories of your childhood and winters past.


You see the headlights of your fathers truck and watch in disgust as he stumbles up the front porch and through the stairs, slamming the door behind him immediately earning screams from your mother. You try to tune out the sounds of their argument, the sounds of objects being thrown. But the sounds only seem louder.


"YOU'RE FUCKING CRAZY! " A shrill cry from your mother erupted, followed the sound of flesh hitting flesh. You could hear the women crying out in pain.


You didn't even move.


They where always like this. One always beating the other. You had learned long ago not to care, especially when your father turned to you too and all you could do is shut down while your mother watched, doing nothing.


You hated her most of all.


More than your father who beat you and touched you whether he was drunk or no.


More than the kids at school who were once your friends but now taunted you for your fathers sick habits.


Because she just stood there. Because she did nothing.


You had almost begun to drift to sleep when heavy footsteps could be heard coming down the hall and you rise in a half panicked state, looking for somewhere to flee . This was the same as always, always he would find you. But something...something was different. You wanted to escape, more than usual. Freedom felt so close this time,or maybe the frigid air had frozen something in your head.


The door handle had only begun to rattle when you sat crouched on your window eying the snow bank below you, trying to estimate the damage if you landed there.


"Come here you little bitch." You whirl around to see your father stumbling towards you. His hands are covered in blood. It splattered on his face. You realize it is eerily quiet down stairs.


Without waiting for the deranged man to get his hands on you, you glance down at the snow covered ground one more time bracing yourself for impact,


and jump.

Lame....everything is lame.

I cant believe I'm posting this.I rarely write anymore and I havent use this type of POV before so yeah....
I am frostbitten.
Sadly, there is no Jack in this chapter. But!
If anyone likes/reads this I'll continue it...even if it doesnt get read I probably will anyway just out of boredom ._.
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:iconlacrimara:
Lacrimara Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist
*___* I need the next chapter
keep up the good work <33
pleeeeeease *begging*
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Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
[link]
I'm not continuing it after that though, sorry
but thanks!~
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Lacrimara Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist
Aww, what a pity! Anyways, it's great ^^
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JoKuLFrOsTiGuArDiAn Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*GASP* wat gonna happen???????
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Please make more it you haven't already! THis is very sad and depressing, but incredibly interesting and nicely writing and I can't wait for Jack to get in the picture! :)
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DoctorsNextCompanion Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist
GREAT!
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1nightpheonix Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg you rock at story this is great
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1nightpheonix Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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liondogger Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
this...is...AWESOME MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks a bunch! I'm working on chpt 3 now :)
Part two should be posted on my profile- [link]

watch me for updates(?)
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liondogger Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
:) :D
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Jenny-Neko Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist
this was really good for the first chapter please write more~!
:D
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tabbyx78 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
continue please. its really good.
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Msnarutowolfgirl Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW. I love it I can't wait for the next one!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks!like, really.^^ the other one should be up soon...like tonight soon. :D
watch me for updates(?)
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh goodness... I can't wait to see where this goes! :O.o:
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks^^ The next chapter should be up tonight :D
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! :D
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Lol yeah its up now so...if u want, check it out :3
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:iconcorporalcornbread:
CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I will as soon as I get a chance :squee:
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:iconwindpetals98:
WindPetals98 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Noooooooo!! Why did it have to end?! T^T more!! Please!!!!
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DarkShadowMagik Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
:heart: more~
:D its really good
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CrazyLadyII Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Moar!
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RedVelvetCupcake101 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
please write more!!!!! Ugh I was breath taken when the father burst in
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my god.
I literally spazzed when I read your comment! Thank you so much,and I'm working on it :D
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RedVelvetCupcake101 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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leonathedemonweapon Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
please, please, please, write more!! This is incredible!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you thank you thank you! Really. :)
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leonathedemonweapon Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course! I am completely frostbitten, so I WANT MORE JACK!!! And this is really well written.
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CountrygalxHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is sooooo good!!! Please write another chapter!! i love it!!!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you soooo muchh lol, it means alot^^
I'm working on it!
Watch me for updates(?) :D
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CountrygalxHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
definitely!! I can't wait to read it!! i'm so excited!!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you again!
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Usernamedawg Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
:O I LOVE IT.
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks! :)
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titigigas Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
I really like it! And I can't wait to see what happens when jack steps into the story, please write some more !! :)
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you so much. I'm working on it right now ^^ I'll try to make it ok.
Watch me for updates(?) :D
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titigigas Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Ok, Sure
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks :)
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titigigas Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Any time
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow... PLease continue! I want to know what happens next!!!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ok, I'll start(attempt) it :)
Watch me for updates(?)
Thank youz ^^
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha Alright! :) and no probz! :)
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=D
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justforfunbaby Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Artist
Ohh I gotta know what happens next!! Please continue! Its really good!
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Tharamin-Thar Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yes please continue it violent but good
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nessieotaku617 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue! Please? It's really good!
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:icondeath5daughter:
Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Really? Thanks! :)
And I'll try, and thanks for the comment...!
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